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Tales of
Hartwell House is a yet-to-be published commercial fiction collection of eighteen interconnected
plot-driven episodes centered on the eclectic family and
staff of Hartwell House TM, a rural Virginia estate during the mid-twentieth century
(111,000 words). |
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At the heart of the collection are Jeremiah
(“Jerry”) Abbott Hartwell, the proprietor of the estate, and
James Biddlecomb the highly competent butler, chauffeur, golf caddie,
and confident. Their relationship echoes the classic Jeeves‑and‑Wooster dynamic: Jerry’s good‑natured impulsiveness balanced
by James’s calm intelligence and quiet mastery of resolving crises. |
The stories are suitable for adaptation as a television series,
with their ensemble cast, episodic structure, uplifting tone, and warm portrayal of rural America. |
Tone and Style |
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Like P.G. Wodehouse’s Bertie & Jeeves stories, Tales of Hartwell House offers delightful episodes with unexpected satisfying endings.
Most stories have James cleverly resolving domestic matters such as a wayward nephew or a widow with marriage designs on Jerry, or more serious crises such as: |
• missing securities
• a romance scam
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• legal scheming to take a family's farm
• the potential exposure of a family secret
• discovery of a infant's grave in a neglected rose garden
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Unlike Wodehouse's first-person narration,
these stories are told predominately in a warm, third-person objective voice. |
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Primary Characters |
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Bachelor Jeremiah Abbott Hartwell resides near the Town of
Berkeley, Virginia, at Hartwell House, a former grand mansion staffed by: |
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James Biddlecomb, unflappable butler, chauffeur, golf caddie,
and vegetable gardener
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Minerva Overton, the forgetful, cantankerous,
and prying
housekeeper.
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Cornelia Sadler, the bright, dependable cook.
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Jerry is often found at the Oakwood Room bar of the Hackberry Hills Country Club. |
He is joined by niece Lavinia Masen Graydon, newly wed to Tolliver Graydon,
a traveling salesman for a wholesale men's and women's ready-to-wear
merchant with offices in Richmond and D.C... |
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Hartwell House TM |
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As described in Chapter 1: |
Three gray stone chimneys watched over Hartwell House, a three-story white frame farmhouse with front and rear airy verandas
and a red tin roof. One chimney gripped an ancient, vigilant weathervane in the shape of a rooster that creaked a warning with shifts in the wind. |
Beyond the house, the abandoned tobacco curing barn, stables, and corn crib were
wrinkled and stooped, their doors sagging like yawning mouths and their windows staring with vacant eyes. |
The proud old carriage house now sheltered a maroon-colored '48 Packard, while the spirited henhouse bustled with life, producing eggs for the kitchen. |
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First Level of Hartwell House |
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The scenes in Hartwell House take place on the first level of the three-story manse, depicted here.
The upper floors are partitioned between owner’s suites and staff. But for a single attic scene they remain behind the curtains.
The lead actors are the parlor, library, and dining room. The kitchen, where the staff takes their meals, is reduced to a supporting role.
It contains a stove, refrigerator, and washing machine. No dryer need apply as the clothes line is sufficient.
The telephone in the front hall and the beverage carts in the parlor and library play their small parts with gusto. |
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The Town of Berkeley |
Carolina Avenue in the nearby fictional
Town of
Berkeley, Virginia, is the locale of various scenes: |
• Esso station
• Lil’s Diner
• A&P
• Lawson's Garage
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• LeBlanc’s Dry Goods Store
• Jennings Funeral Parlour
• Berkeley Public Library
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• Berkeley Bank & Trust
• Hardaway’s Billiard Parlour
• Western Union Office
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The Tales |
These are the stories and the thumbnail subject of each:
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1. |
James to
the Rescue |
Jerry’s niece
Lavinia comes to live at Hartwell House and is pursued by a
smooth-talking traveling salesman |
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Tolliver Joins the Family |
Jerry
promises to invest in a fund managed by a scoundrel |
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Willow Arrives |
A cocker spaniel, grieving
his mate, disrupts the household |
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Timmy Comes to Visit |
When Jerry’s juvenile
delinquent nephew arrives at Hartwell House |
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5. |
Tim Returns Home |
… he learns some
lessons in a surprising fashion |
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6. |
Jerry and the Widow |
The household is in turmoil
when a widow expresses a romantic interest in Jerry |
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7. |
Lavinia Receives a Letter |
The sender of an anonymous letter threatens
to expose a Hartwell family secret |
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8. |
The Rose Garden |
Finding an infant's grave in
a rose garden from forty years earlier sends Jerry and James
on a search |
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9. |
The High School Reunion |
Jerry's sister fears a nosey
classmate gathering information for a high school reunion
publication might
dig too deep |
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10. |
Jerry's Birthday Party |
While preparations for
Jerry's birthday progress, he and James try to solve the mystery
of missing stock certificates. |
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11. |
Lavinia Goes to Bat for Iris |
James pursues the truth about
Jerry's cousin who admits to Lavinia that her husband struck her |
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12. |
Uncle Joseph Calls for
Help |
After a prominent family
discovers its patriarch's second will, they pursue legal action to
take a Black
family's land |
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A Damsel in Distress |
A woman masquerading as a
caregiver aims to swindle an elderly man |
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14. |
A Hartwell House
Christmas |
Alone at Hartwell House over
Christmas, Jerry and Minerva experience outrageous adventures |
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15. |
The Matter of
Miss Haizlip |
A woman seduces married
members of Jerry's club for the purpose of blackmail |
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16. |
Hope Comes
to Hartwell House |
The arrival of a precocious
child brings joy and distress to the residents of Hartwell House |
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17. |
Minerva's
Romance |
A WWII veteran seeking
money and matrimony pursues Minerva |
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18. |
Hope to
the Rescue |
Hope learns a disgraced
banker has never met his granddaughter |
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What Beta Readers Are Saying |
Mr. Pritchett has shared the first few tales with beta readers.
Here are some comments. |
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James to
the Rescue and Tolliver Joins the Family |
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• The voice, tone, and pacing are all wonderfully done. I felt
like I was reading a Wodehouse piece. My favorite strengths are
that the dialogue has such subtle turns and a gentle wittiness. And of course I
love a story with a tidy and happy ending |
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Very
engaging, colorful and rewarding to read |
• Well-constructed |
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• They are original, charming, clever and sure to be publishable.
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Absolutely delightful and I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
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Really charming with fun characters. I can hear the way
they talk in my head. Very well written. It really takes the
reader to another time and place.
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• The ending was clever and cute. It was a quick read, didn’t
drag, and you painted a vivid picture of the characters whom I
could easily visualize.
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• Such wonderful characters and interesting plots |
• Loved the story
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• Fun to read
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• Enjoyed the characters and storyline. There
was a fun use of language and phrasing. And who doesn’t love a
happy ending?! |
• It’s amazing how you can fit so much of a
story into so little words |
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• I think you have a real gift, John. Very readable!
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• An enjoyable experience. Very nicely done! |
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• They are excellent! They truly pulled me in and kept me
engrossed. You write as if you have been doing this for years and years. And the best compliment …you left me wanting
more!!!! I would read the whole series, or better yet, watch it on TV! I think you have a real gift, and you are going to be
writing for years to come! |
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• I like the way the story introduces potential hazard and conflict..
Family bonds are strengthened and justice is served. Happy ending! I also like the length of the story
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• I loved the stories. They are fun, quick stories with lots of sly humor, smart twists and happy endings. Very enjoyable!
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Willow Arrives |
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• Such wonderful characters and interesting plots |
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• Delightful |
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• Being a dog person, I really enjoyed the it. A very good feel
good story all the way around |
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Timmy
Comes to Visit and Tim Returns Home |
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• Such heart-warming plot lines. I like your use of language and
there are some amusing lines |
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• It all came together. I liked the storyline very much
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• So cute and your imagery does not fail. |
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• I am loving the quirky characters and all of their behind the
scenes scheming that you don’t even have to put into the
stories. These are so well done.
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• I thoroughly enjoyed reading these two
stories. You must get
them published. They take you back to a gentler time.
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What a wonderful continuation of this family and their situations. I loved the whole thing. All the characters are just right. |
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Well developed characters and plots. The stories are enriched with good descriptions,
conversations, and details about your characters’ lives as they
live them. |
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Bio |
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Mr. Pritchett, a graduate of Rice University and the Tepper School of
Business, pursued two interests after a successful business career.
• A noted Virginia genealogist, he authored the 4,000-page Southside
Virginia Genealogies, a top selling publication of Genealogical
Publishing Company. In it, he pioneered the use of the "in their own
words" feature permitting each of more than 300 ancestors
to give a brief first-person account of their life.
• As a voice actor, he produced 100+ programs of “An
Hour of Short Stories” for North Texas Radio for the Blind, voicing many
of the stories. |
Retiring a second time after a career as a
top-producing residential real estate agent, he turned to his genuine interest — fiction. |
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A son and grandson
of Virginians, he spent summers among the state's small towns
and farms, and thus his choice for the stories' locale.
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JPritchett@msn.com |